proposal revised!!

Now i have revised my proposal, from installing two radiator fans, to learning, and understanding the history, and the main attractions of the pike place market in downtown Seattle. I want to learn from which point did it go from being a market to a full blown tourist attraction, or has it always been this way. All these questions i soon hope to have answers for, and i will take a field trip, and possibly interview, people , and ask what brings them to the pike place market.